冊 2 · 句子怎麼長得自然 · Lesson 11
連接與節奏
Connectors & Rhythm: and / but / so / though / however
美國人說話節奏靠連接詞分工:but 轉、so 推結果、though 句尾軟轉、however 偏書面。
對比
| 較不自然/易錯 | 更自然的美式 | 說明 |
|---|---|---|
| I like it, but however it's pricey. | I like it, but it's pricey. / …; however, it's pricey. | 不要疊用 |
| Although it rained, but we went. | Although it rained, we went. / It rained, but we went. | although 不與 but 並用 |
| I was tired. So that I left. | I was tired, so I left. | so that 表目的,不是所以 |
| The idea is good. But. | The idea is good, but… / …good. That said, … | 別把 But 孤成一句(寫作) |
規則/用法
- and 加資訊;but/yet 轉折;so 結果;because/since 原因。
- though / although:讓步;口語常把 *though* 放句尾(*It was rough, though.*)。
- however / nevertheless:較正式,常句首+逗號或分號連接。
- C1 口語潤滑見冊 4(Actually, That said…);本課先打穩邏輯連接。
現代例句
- 房產
The unit shows well, but the HVAC is near end of life.
房子漂亮,但空調快壽終。
- 投資
Diligence looks clean, so we're comfortable moving forward.
盡職調查乾淨,我們願意往前。
- 生活
I wanted sushi. I cooked pasta after the showing, though.
想吃壽司,不過看房後還是煮了義大利麵。
- 投資
The plan is aggressive; however, the rent upside is real.
計畫積極;但租金上行真實存在。
- 生活
It was crowded at Costco, and the parking lot was chaos.
好市多人很多,停車場一片混亂。
- 房產
Since the appraisal is delayed, we'll slip closing a few days.
估價延遲,成交會晚幾天。
跟讀短文
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The unit shows well, but the HVAC is near end of life. Diligence looks clean, so we're comfortable moving forward. I wanted a bigger yard. I chose the condo for commute reasons, though. The plan is aggressive; however, the upside on rents is real. It was crowded at the open house, and the driveway was pure chaos. Since the appraisal is delayed, we'll slip closing a few days without panicking. Good connectors keep a seller conversation calm: acknowledge the upside, then land the maintenance concern without apology theater.
房子看起來漂亮,但空調快壽終。盡職調查看起來乾淨,所以我們願意往前。我原本想要更大院子,不過為了通勤還是選了公寓。計畫很積極;但租金上行確實在。開放看屋人很多,車道一片混亂。既然估價延遲,成交晚幾天,先別慌。好的連接能讓對賣方的談話冷靜:先認上行,再落地維護疑慮。
慣用語包
that said
話雖如此
職場/中性
even so
即便如此
中性
so… that…
如此…以致…
中性
end of life (EOL)
壽命將盡(設備)
職場
迷你練習
- 合併兩句(轉折):The price is fair. The timeline is unrealistic.
- 句尾加 though:I liked the neighborhood.
- 改錯:Although the offer is solid, but I'm hesitating.