冊 2 · 句子怎麼長得自然 · Lesson 12
從屬子句
Subordinate Clauses: because / since / although / while
從屬子句把原因、讓步、對比嵌進主句,讓論點一次說完。
對比
| 較不自然/易錯 | 更自然的美式 | 說明 |
|---|---|---|
| Because I was late, so I missed it. | Because I was late, I missed it. | 不要 because…so |
| Since I don't know.(當「因為」卻不完整) | Since I don't know, I'll ask. / I don't know. | since 子句不能當整句甩那裡 |
| While I agree the design…(口語易歧義) | While I agree with the design, … / I agree… | while=雖然/當…時,要夠清楚 |
| He left while I have been talking. | He left while I was talking. | 時態配合 |
規則/用法
- because 直接原因;since / as 較已知背景(語氣較柔)。
- although / even though:讓步,比 but 更「整句包裝」。
- while / whereas:對比兩邊;while 也可表時間重疊。
- when / after / before / as soon as:時間從屬;美式口語 *once* 很常用(*Once we have keys…*)。
現代例句
- 房產
Even though inspection found issues, none are deal-breakers yet.
雖有驗屋問題,但還不是破局點。
- 投資
Once we have clear title, we can set a firm closing date.
產權一清楚就能訂成交日。
- 生活
I stayed home because I was wiped after hauling donations.
搬完捐贈物累壞了,所以待在家。
- 房產
Whereas the first condo felt dark, this one gets great light.
第一間公寓偏暗,這一間採光很好。
- 投資
As we discussed, the contingency is still on the table.
如討論過,附條件仍在檯面上。
- 生活
Text me when you get to the lockbox.
到鎖盒那邊打給我。
跟讀短文
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Even though the inspection found issues, none of them are automatic deal-breakers. Once we have clear title, we can set a firm closing date. I stayed home because I was wiped after moving boxes all day. Whereas the first unit felt dark, this one gets great afternoon light. As we discussed, the financing contingency is still on the table until the lender signs off. Subordinate clauses let me pack diligence into one breath, which matters when a showing slot is only fifteen minutes.
雖有驗屋問題,但沒有一項是自動破局。一旦產權清楚,就能訂明確成交日。搬箱子搬一天,我累壞了所以待在家。第一間偏暗,這一間下午採光很好。如我們討論過的,在貸方點頭前,貸款附條件仍可談。從屬子句能把盡職調查塞進一口氣,看房只有十五分鐘時很重要。
慣用語包
deal-breaker
破局條件
職場/口語
on the table
仍可談/擺在檯面
職場
wiped
累慘了
口語
firm date
確定日期
職場
迷你練習
- 用 even though 改寫:The house is small. We still love it.
- 用 once 寫:拿到鑰匙就拍照記錄屋況。
- 改錯:Because the rate is good, so we should lock.